Score: 8

"A suggestion for future voice recordings..."

submission: "Chaos with the Record Button"

date: March 7, 2009

I don't know if you made a script or not but usually having one around tends to help out a lot. I am curious on what you use as your recording program though... the gaps are waaay too far apart on your voices and I recommend you get a program that is easy to use and that will let you fill these gaps easier (I recommend Audacity).

The background feels sort of empty, I recommend that you put some music in the background and make your recording much shorter. A good recommendation would be "TomaMoto Voice Demo 2008" (http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/list en/136431)

You have great talent, you just need to show it off more dynamically because unfortunately people have short attention spans. Keep up the great work!

Score: 8

"Amazingly catchy..."

submission: The Swiss Formula

date: January 23, 2009

The song had a way of hooking me in and only taking me in more and more into the song. To tell you the truth it was like being on a roller coaster and just going up, up, up, up, and even more up. But the only problem was that the roller coaster never went down or went with the ride. You built up the song, but I sort of didn't feel like you "played" with the song but just "stacked" more on it. This would make an excellent loop for a game, or a scene for a flash video here but I suggest that you keep working on the song and I think that you'll find out how to make it longer, better, and much more intense (wow that sounded wrong...)

Maybe you could crank up the bass a little too....

Score: 9

"It could use some lyrics..."

submission: Saturday Night Blues

date: January 21, 2009

I'm not expecting you to get some lyrics right away or criticize you for not having any but when I hear this song I think of a blues band or just one very soulful pianist that could just go on preaching the blues from his soul.

It's an amazing song that helps bring out the flavor of the blues from the stereotype of being country's little old fashioned cousin from the south. The melody is upbeat, dynamic, new, yet somehow familiar. My main complaint is that the song is too short, other than that there are some small things here and there that bug me but nothing that gets in the way of the song as a whole.

All in all it's an amazing song that I could listen to whenever the Saturday Night Blues catch up to me and if someone on NG could sing (sing well please...) I suggest they make some lyrics to this and just hit a lot harder.

Score: 9

"Very soulful..."

submission: A sad man's story

date: December 14, 2008

The song has an amazing essence that I rarely see in most music. You can actually see something when hearing this song. When I listened to this song I definitely saw the hobo sitting out at the end of a boxcar, watching the cacti roll by. He sits there breathing in the hot sandy air with his thoughts constantly clouding him... wondering how he got to this low and how hopeless it is for him to try to bring himself back to his original glory.

My only wish is that it was a bit longer really, it's truly an amazing song but it just needed to stick a bit more to reach that point of perfection. But hell, it's amazing, don't sweat it :D

Score: 9

"What was your intention for making this track?"

submission: [ s i t t i n g ] ("Me Bill")

date: December 10, 2008

One thing I do not know is if that you made the song to go with the animation, did he make the animation to go with your song or some combination of the two. The song standing by itself is very powerful, my only wish is that it would be a bit longer but other than that you did an amazing job.

Score: 9

"the lol song"

submission: lol, techno

date: December 9, 2008

It's called running in the 90's... I don't know the author but if you google the song you'll find it.

Great remix by the way!